Okay so, I'm going to be rewritting both chapter 2 and 3, some things might change, some things I'm just going to be adding more flesh to, since I recently got a hate comment, and though the person didn't specify why they thought the story was so bad, I myself realized some things that could do with some improvement. The story could care to be less stiff in the writing, and more descriptive explaination and dialogue. So the goal is to make the story more interesting to read and make the

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